BR 1-7: Dad's Grand Plan

Its holiday time and Dad has a great idea.Will it work?

Everyone was excited, because it washoliday time. Also Floppy that is dog was excited and was running round. Momsaid that dad has a Grand Plan. Children didn’t know about Grand Plan. Theypacked bag and rode a car. And they had forgotten Floppy. Floppy was sad. Theyhad to go back for him. At last they got to the holiday cottage. When theyentered in there, they were surprised. Because there was soot everywhere. Itwas very duty. There is a black bird in the room. Cleaning up soot was Dad’sGrand Plan.
Hunt, R & Brychta, A. (2003). Dad’sGrand Plan. Oxfordw: Oxford University Press. (120)